[FDK] Hurt: Lois' story

[C_K_unlimited]

WOW!

This story brought me close to tears and made me speechless. I really don't know what to say.
The idea of actually letting Superman die in that L&C episode isn't new, but I've never read a story dealing with Lois' grief the way you do, letting her know that Superman and Clark are the same person. Her grief is very touching and reminds me of all the feelings I felt (and still feel) about some of my loved ones dieing.

Again a very well written story of yours.

[Demi]

Thank you CK, when I wrote this story, I was thinking about a friend who died some time before. I hoped to convey some of the feelings I felt at the time and it helped me coping with the thoughts of her.

I'm glad you liked the story.

I tried to translate the story to german without changing but now I don't think I can do it without changing several parts. My thoughts and feelings have changed since then. Although I still like my english version, the german version will be somewhat different.

I hope you'll like that version as well, if I ever get my muse to obey enough to let me work on the stories I've begun.

[Tahu I left behind a glass slipper and a businesscard in case the prince is really dumb - Lorelai Gilmore]

boah Demi, die Story ist weltklasse. Intensiv, auf den Punkt. Und auch mich hast Du am Rande der Tränen. Wow. Ich bin sprachlos.

Das FDK wird Deiner Story nicht mal annähernd gerecht.

[Demi]

Danke dir, da werd ich ja ganz rot. Dann muss ich endlich bald in die Puschen kommen und alles übersetzen damit es alle lesen können.

Ich danke dir und auch CK für euer FDK!